Make our explainer video's speech more entertaining and engaging

We have these videos explaining features of a web product we did for one of our clients. We want to make the speech more fun, entertaining and engaging. Please submit your ideas, if they're good we'll hire you to write a new speech. We are a web development agency. People come to us with just an idea (here, the client did know that technology could enhance his hostels business, but not how) and we design the product that fit their requirements: see this video for more details, it explains what we do and how we worked for these guys [login to view URL]