SAMPLE: "The global journey of Al Sham Sweets began in 1997 in Damascus—the capital of Syria and the oldest capital city in the world—esteemed throughout history for its expertise in the making of Mediterranean sweets. [paragraph] Combining talent, experience and his county’s rich heritage of sweet-making, Samir al-Shami founded Al Sham Sweets to bring his mouth-watering creations to the world." Hi, my name is David and I'd be very happy to proofread your profile -- I can give an accurate price and turnaround time after checking files. I've been teaching English and proofreading/editing for over 15 years. I edit web sites (see links below), marketing materials (brochures, flyers, presentations), press-releases, games, video scripts, theses, business plans, patents, instruction manuals, applications, etc. My rate is not the lowest, it does, however, reflect the time, effort and commitment I put into my work. I offer free unlimited revisions and I can be contacted most of the day, and night. Looking forward to working with you, kind regards, David.