Hi, I am a perfect bilingual, and possess perfectly both English and French grammars. I am new on Freelancer but already got 2 projects with great ratings and comments.
I have already seen few mistakes such as :
Les vélos de bonne qualité d’un cadre aluminium, adulte et enfant
Proper sentence : Des velos de bonne qualite avec cadre aluminium, adulte et enfant
Un choix d’accessoires compris: les paniers, les sacoches et les portes-vélos
Correct sentence : Un choix d'accessoires qui comprend : les paniers, les sacoches et les porte-velos.
DispoVélo est une entreprise familiale. Nous vous proposons une location de vélos facilement en Charente, Charente-Maritime, Dordogne et Vienne. -
Correct sentence : DispoVelo est une entreprise familiale. Nous vous proposons une location de velos tres facile dans les regions suivantes : Charente, Charente-Maritime, Dordogne et aussi a Vienne.
French is a very subtle language and has its own forms. Your site will not look very good or very profesional if you don't not use the proper format of sentences as used in all the french sites.
There are few mistakes even in the opening page which I did not yet mention.
If you give me this project, I can promise a perfectly reviewed site.
I have been in the travel and tourism industry for 25 years as sales Manager for KLM/Air France/Northwest in Oman, and I used to send may tourists and arrange everything from scratch for them, therefore I'm very familiar with this field.
Thank you very much.