Improve website headlines to make it more compelling and selling


i need an expert in E-Commerce who helps me to make our website texts more compelling and more selling. Our Product is a GPS-Game which we sell as Software as a Service to businesses. We soon want to sell online, thats why we need your help.

Our site:

[url removed, login to view] (you will work on a newer version which i will send you via chat)

Basic tasks:

-Improve the headlines of our website

-Change the order of paragraphs if needed

-Give us some additional feedback what we can do to make our website even more selling


You may follow the AIDA Model [url removed, login to view]

If you have any questions just let me know. Many thanks for your help in advance.

Best regards,


Skills: Content Writing, Editing, Internet Marketing, Online Writing, Website Design

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