voice over plus script correction

reference video 2 minutes:

Watch "funny airplane animated commercial" on YouTube

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I am making a video like this one I have draft script ready.

Please help me correct it and do small computer like voice over.

Skills: Scripting, Videography, Voice Talent

Location: United States

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About the Employer:
( 5 reviews ) karachi, Pakistan

Project ID: #18001582