I posted a Article to a Journal. I got some feedbacks. I should fix them in one day. I have Limited time.
Here are the feedbacks;
-It is suggested to rewrite paper text to be in the passive form (for example, "It is considered and described...").
-Used English language and grammar could be improved. It should be used sentences that are more with structure appropriate for the English language. Also, there are some too long sentences that should be shorten or divided into more sentences.
-There are some grammatical errors in the manuscript. Please check them.