I need a writer to tell me what he/she thinks of my story

Completed Posted 5 years ago Paid on delivery
Completed Paid on delivery

I'm planning to submit my application for a graduate film school. I was asked to Describe an emotionally significant experience in my life and how it affected me. (2,000 characters maximum). I wrote two stories, but not sure which one I should submit. My specializing isn't writing, I'm not a writer and the school doesn't expect me to be. I don't think the school cares about my ability to write in terms of fancy vocabs and language tricks, but more like was it a good content? did the reader connect with it? Did it address and generate emotions?

I need someone who can read them for me and give me an opinion.

Creative Writing Editorial Writing Filmmaking Writing

Project ID: #17768984

About the project

44 proposals Remote project Active 5 years ago

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MarayaLK

Hi, First of all: what area do you want to specialize in at film school? My nephew went to film school and they took classes in everything - including script writing. Secondly, they can't judge you on "content" sinc More

$20 USD in 1 day
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sjalex

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zohaab85

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DillonXander

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RebeccaRoy

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Mathenam

"Hello, I believe in the beauty of language and writing as a way to communicate that. Writing is a way of life for me; my interests span vocabulary, grammar, narrative and far beyond. New projects excite me and drive More

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Hemi2012

Hi There, I can give you an objective opinion and where possible I can help you construct a compelling emotive story. Yes, they are more interested in the emotions displayed then worrying about the fancy use of voca More

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NewLightWorker

Hello, I am a University educated (native English speaking) Canadian with extensive experience in North America and Europe. My English test score is 98% and my expertise is in proofreading and editing application r More

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RAHEL198

Hello. I am a professional writer with experience of over ten years. I am well versed with skills on research, article writing, creative writing and proof reading among others. I wok around the clock to ensure that I d More

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Valuesolutions

Hello, i have read the details provided..please contact me to discuss more on the project deadline and some other few things

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kaycap2011

I can take a look at your story and provide great feedback on what needs to be approved upon.

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jcyujay1

Hi, Share the two stories you wrote with me and I will treat it professionally, helping you decide which to submit. I am an experienced creative writer with and easily accessible to clients. Looking forward to work More

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shehriyarkhan116

Hi I am working as web content writing and articles for last 8 years. I am already writing web content I will provide you accurate work on time

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SarahC7615

Hello! My name is Sarah Conner. I am currently an English major with an Emphasis in Creative Writing. I have been writing since I was a small child and am very confident in the skills I can provide for you. I have More

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Flamingosway

I consider that I am the best candidate, since writing is one of my skills. I can help you check if what you have written is good and has good content

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Pinetree123

Born and brought up in Jaipur, which falls into northern part of India, where Hindi is the native language, my mother tongue, & is widely used in each walk of life, hence provided me an excellent exposure & command ove More

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buhleswmoyo

i am an author and an editor. i wil be of great value reviewing your work

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RuhiniSenara

I'm happy to help you in this project. I love reading and editing and commenting on them. I'm ready to help you out.

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DeyaniraGonzalez

Hello, I am a university professor, I have extensive experience in writing and formulating applications for scholarship applications and project financing. I have training in the management of emotions, multiple intell More

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kuhreestee

Avid reader, and would love to check out your papers.

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saquibimran88

Great and exciting, but surely an important and responsible task. I would love to be a part of this journey. I am an avid reader and have myself been writing such socialistic real emotional contents since long. I thin More

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