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Hello! I have tweaked the loose ends in terms of simplifying the language by omitting unnecessary terminology or jargon. I have made the copy precise adhering to the Australian first aid training standards with several hospitals and emergency services' first aid guides as resource. I have focused on including the introduction to the injury for which the first aid is required and mainly moved on to 'What to Do.' I have kept them informative yet precise. If you would like me to add further details or edit, I can surely do that since if you are after only 30 seconds worth of content, then a lot would have to be removed and made sort of bullet points which can be done. Please have a read! Thanks!

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