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Hi! Sample of my work:Refusal to Utilize Facebook Site by Some People Revealed! There were reports people have stopped utilizing their Facebook pages anymore. The reports came in a little bit alarming, instead of increasing the population and get Facebook fans to maximize their usage of the platform they are now refusing to get involved. The estimated number of the people whom are now refusing any participation with the Social Media Networking Platform is not that alarming. The Facebook fanatics have reached the 8oo million marks and two-thirds of that population came from the US, it shouldn't be affecting the volume of users. But the fact that they have already tried and enjoyed it in the past is what's worrisome. As preparations of yet another awesome upgrade to be launched in spring, the stoppage from use reports put a hinder to the proceedings. The Facebook's ultimate goal is to build limitless communication ties and bonds within the user's community. The platform is supposed to be bringing them closer to each other and not the other way around. The company is now experiencing some difficulties with how Facebook Pages get past the trust issues, especially in the United States Area. Refusals in participation with the site get in the way, even from those who have utilized it before. The company is having a hard time to get Facebook fans to utilize the page once more and bring them back to its fold. Let us take a closer look at the reasons that they said were legit, which led some people stop using Facebook: 1. Privacy issues - Some people say their privacy got violated since they utilized the Facebook platform. 2. Becoming a Stranger/ getting Alienated - They say they grow further away from friends and relatives instead of getting closer. 3. Missed a Lot of Things - They rely too much on the use of Facebook and they missed a lot of things such as: gatherings, anniversaries, birthdays, christening and other bunch of stuff. They just view pictures, video uploads instead of being there in person and be seen and be connected. - But the availability of pictures and video uploads that plays some sort of portal for people whom were at distant places. It made them feel they were a part of the events by just viewing them from their Facebook accounts. In the first place, this Facebook feature was the primary reason that get Facebook fans created their accounts in the site! Or wasn't it? 4. Weird Coincidences - A testimonial of Tyson Balcomb that stated a weird encounter in an elevator with a woman she doesn't know personally but have common friends with her from Facebook. - It doesn't really sound weird right? Just imagine the very huge population of Facebook users from around the world, 8oo million of them in fact, and to get Facebook fans to bump into each other is rather inevitable. Bumping into each other in the grocery store, in the library, on a plain off to somewhere is not a weird coincidence. As a matter of fact it is an opportunity to get to know the other person well and vice versa. Such holdouts will not be treated as a negative factor that will prevent to get Facebook fans to continue on utilizing the Facebook page to its maximum potentials. The company will protect the current users in the country as effectively as possible. As Facebook have the abilities to entertain its currents users by the millions and keep them coming back for more! I hope I get chosen.Thank You. less